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l don’t wanna cry
dont wanna cry,
nothin I can do to stop this hurting inside …
feed me , feed me , says the magnet in my chest
drawing in, every desire, dream and notion.. riding
it like a strong black dragon , swelling up like a river that sweeps away every last possession
All while the tiny people chuckled in comrodary
alongside the riverbank, not a care in the world , watching get their homes get carried away
I surrendered. Roll onto my back, allowed the river to carry me to a new land
Bumping up against the shore
landed,
drinking the in the holy water and green mountains
Sun shining down on me
lifting my chin up, twilight
shooting across the sky like stars
a symphony of hope
for a better life a better way
It reads perfectly, well done
Thank you. Much appreciated. I haven’t gambled for over a year now. I still struggle at times and your reply came at the right time.
superbly written
*both of your replies